2 sentences

1. 老师点评了这篇作文的优缺点。

   lǎo​shī diǎn​píng le zhè piān zuò​wén de yōu​quē​diǎn.

   The teacher commented on the strengths and weaknesses of the essay.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

2. 他在书页边缘写下了许多精彩的点评。

   tā zài shū​yè biān​yuán xiě​xià le xǔ​duō jīng​cǎi de diǎn​píng.

   He wrote many brilliant comments in the margins of the book.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary