created sense approved 冗笔/冗筆 · rǒngbǐ · superfluous strokes
冗笔 / 冗筆
rǒngbǐ
superfluous strokes
unnecessary or redundant strokes in calligraphy or painting
这个字的最后一划显得有些冗笔，破坏了整体的结构。
created sense approved 冗笔/冗筆 · rǒngbǐ · superfluous words
冗笔 / 冗筆
rǒngbǐ
superfluous words
extra or unnecessary words or sentences in a piece of writing
这篇文章结尾有几处冗笔，建议删掉以使整体更精炼。