7 sentences

1. 这篇作文得了个高分。

   zhè piān zuò​wén dé le gè gāo​fēn.

   This essay got a high score.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

2. 她在这次作文比赛中得奖了。

   tā zài zhè cì zuò​wén bǐ​sài zhōng dé​jiǎng le.

   She won a prize in this essay competition.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

3. 老师正在给我们的作文打分。

   lǎo​shī zhèng​zài gěi wǒ​men de zuò​wén dǎ​fēn.

   The teacher is grading our essays.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

4. 老师正在给学生的作文评分。

   lǎo​shī zhèng​zài gěi xué​sheng de zuò​wén píng​fēn.

   The teacher is grading the students' essays.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

5. 老师点评了这篇作文的优缺点。

   lǎo​shī diǎn​píng le zhè piān zuò​wén de yōu​quē​diǎn.

   The teacher commented on the strengths and weaknesses of the essay.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

6. 老师在我的作文上批了一些评语。

   lǎo​shī zài wǒ de zuò​wén shàng pī le yī​xiē píng​yǔ.

   The teacher wrote some comments on my essay.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary

7. 老师要求我们在一个小时内作文。

   lǎo​shī yāo​qiú wǒ​men zài yī gè xiǎo​shí nèi zuò​wén.

   The teacher asked us to write a composition within an hour.

   Source: Dong Chinese Dictionary